this is awesome! its way better than what i could do, anyways. okay a critique! here we go!
story: i really really REALLY love the summary you wrote to go along with this. The Rebellion sounds epic, so if you ever start writing it you'll have to tell me. it kind of reminds me of The Hunger Games for some reason... i know it was inspired by that Sherlock Holmes quote, but i cant help but think of The Hunger Games. i dont know why. it is an original idea though, so ill give you 4.5 stars for origninality.
picture: it looks awesome! i really like how the blood is splattered on the rock it looks amazing! but you said that schad's executions were bloody and gruesome, and i dont see much blood. i understand if you wanted to keep it semiclean but i would expect more after reading your story
keep up the great work! i highly recommend +watching =Detective-Wolf! she wont disappoint you!
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okay a critique! here we go!
story: i really really REALLY love the summary you wrote to go along with this. The Rebellion sounds epic, so if you ever start writing it you'll have to tell me.
picture: it looks awesome! i really like how the blood is splattered on the rock it looks amazing! but you said that schad's executions were bloody and gruesome, and i dont see much blood. i understand if you wanted to keep it semiclean but i would expect more after reading your story
keep up the great work! i highly recommend +watching =Detective-Wolf! she wont disappoint you!